This and that, she replied.
Replied. That’s how you know
You’re reading invented
Dialogue. No speaker
Reporting earlier
Conversation would say
That anyone replied.
Then she said, and I said,
And then, and then, and then.
Circadian, lunar,
We’re all tuned to rhythms
Of Earth’s local forces,
Even thoughts, even words.
Invented dialogue
Is detached from the clocks
That create speech rhythms,
And novelists are tugged
By tides nothing to do
With time in their fictions.
It’s easier to write
Scenes set decades ago
Than in another hour
Of the day, by the light
Of nonexistent moons.
Every body’s a clock
Tuned to more ghostly clocks
We all feel, she replied.
Saturday, July 24, 2021
Talking to the Ghosts of Clocks
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