There are times, as in haiku,
Four-character line lyrics,
And other fiercely short poems,
When the available slots
To slip words in are so few,
Le mot juste really should rule.
If, in a poem of ten words,
One of those words is southward,
Well, why that and no other?
You can only get so far
Defending a bland word choice
Invoking simplicity.
At first glance, any handful
Of small words seems similar,
The same aesthetic appeal.
But if you want or have to
Cut your words down to a few,
Think hard. Then pretend to choose.
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